Teachers Comments

Teachers feedback please. A lot of the comments I put on Tabitha's are also relevant to you, although currently I think yours is slightly better as everything is at least on here and readily available and I have now viewed the Prezis since looking at hers! High level 3 for r&p-15/20. The planning mark will inevitably go up as you include drafts and layouts for your ancillaries and to boost what's already here, check there's enough theory and terminology on all your deconstructions and research-including the codes and conventions of film reviews for example. Also, are you having a storyboard? Couldn't we prettify your shotlist by combining this with your location scouting in some way, just to boost overall presentation? Good work so far Jamie. - i have added my potential pictures for my posters as well as a few attempts of mine so far, which i think i am improving on as im going. - i have added my focus group in and what advice they have given to our group - ive added the target audience actually onto my blog I have also taken your advice for adding in pictures to prettify our shotlist and show our filming location, however the camera that i had taken these pictures on has been locked in our location (the flat) due to tabitha locking the keys inside, as soon as we get the other keys to get the camera i will update the shotlist with these and then upload it. we have also decided against using a storyboard due to potentially going to have a detailed shot list which will include location pictures and in sequence of our short film showing how we would like it to go.

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